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Friday, August 13, 2010, 6:42 PM
We Fell In Love?

Fanfic: We Fell In Love?
Author: Nisrandom
Reviewer: Elizabeth


Title: 4/5

Not totally original but because it has that question mark, it makes people curious about what will happen.

Background/Poster: 5 /5

You’re color theme is very cute J

Forwards: 6/10

I wish you would have said more but I love it because it makes you want to read it and wonder what will happen.

Plot: 15/15

At first I thought it was going to be like any other version of WGM that I’ve read but surprisingly it’s not. So far I like how the plotline is going so keep it up ^^

Originality/Creativity: 14/15

Some parts feel like déjà vu to me but other parts are completely new and when I read a story with the(almost!) same plotline

Flow: 9/10

At first it felt as if it were going to fast but now it is going at a nice pace. But I think you were trying to make it fast at first to get to your main plot right?

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10

I couldn’t really find any grammar or spelling problems as I read the chapters over again.

Characterization: 15/15

At the beginning I like the way Leeteuk was mean off set but on set he was a total romantic! Of course I prefer the total romantic. But later on both their characters mature and you make it very clear how they change.

Writing Style: 9/10

There were several places where you used … but you could’ve used a comma instead like

“There…happy now?” Leeteuk asked ______. But it could be “There, happy now?” Leeteuk asked ______.

But overall it was good.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

Way to go! Can’t wait till you post more!!



Total: 91/100

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