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Monday, July 19, 2010, 7:39 PM
fanfic: Living with famous idiots!author: sujudork602
reviewer: Melissa
Title: 5/5 - The title is funny and shows the character’s personality. It fits the story well!
Background/Poster: 5/5- Shows that the story will be a funny and quirky! Good choice of colours!
Forewords:10/10- The introduction is told from the main character’s point of view, which is different from most of the forewords that I’ve read. Great job!
Plot:15/15- Your plot is quite solid and flows well.
Creativity/Originality: 14/15- Events are creative and make it interesting to read, I definitely like the scene where Henry played his violin in the park with the panda costume on! ^^ One thing I would change would be how Alex came to live with them. Instead of having a family member moving in with Super Junior, maybe Alex could have moved in because of someone’s mistake? Otherwise, this is a really cute story!!
Flow: 10/10- Events are well connected together and flow well.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10- I did find some minor spelling mistakes like “welp” and “hi” instead of “his”, but otherwise, grammar and spelling is great!
Characterization: 15/15- Each character has it’s own personality and are a little different from their actual personalities, like Leeteuk! :). Makes the story interesting to read and enjoyable.
Writing Style: 10/10- Writing style is simple and easy to read. Keep it up!
Overall enjoyment: 98/100
Labels: Melissa