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Wednesday, August 11, 2010, 9:24 PM
My Private Tutor

fanfic: My Private Tutor
author: Gril4Life
reviewer: Melissa

Title: 5/5 - I really like the title! It fits the storyline well.


Background/Poster:5/5- The background and poster is very cute and bubbly. It fits the main character and the storyline well.


Forewords:10/10- Good and detailed. Definately captures a reader's interest. Well done!


Plot:15/15- Good solid plot. Very easy to follow.


Creativity/Originality:15/15- Well written and very easy to follow. :)


Flow:10/10- Excellent flow. Everything ties in nicely and smoothly.



Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary:1010- I didn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes. :) Nice job!!




Characterization:14/15- I found that the characters were a little cliche. If they had a personality that was unique, it would make things more interesting.



Writing Style:10/10- Great, and easy to understand. The character's thoughts and feelings were expressed clearly and precicely.



Overall enjoyment: 5/5



Total: 99/100

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