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Tuesday, November 16, 2010, 9:26 PM
To Dance is to Believe
Fanfic: To Dance is to BelieveAuthor: FlyxToxHeaven
Reviewer: Melissa
Title: 5/5
I'm all for cheesy!! As long as it catches my attention and makes me want to read it, it's an awesome title!
Background/Poster: 5/5
Poster is well done and colours are well chosen to depict storyline. Dark colours eh? Sounds like something bad will happen.
Forewords: 10/10
This gave me a good insight on the character and it didn't leave me confused or feel that something is missing.
Plot: 15/15
Interesting plot and it's easy to follow. It's different than most plots I've seen, not like the same old, same old. Really kept my attention to the end.
Creativity/Originality: 15/15
I see lots of creativity here! I can see that it was well thought out and well written!!
Flow: 10/10
Flows well and the transitions between scenes are well done.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/10
I did find a couple minor mistakes, but other than that, grammar and vocab are excellent. I really liked how you used a rich variety of words for description. That really kept me reading.
Characterization: 15/15
I absolutely love your characters! Each character has their own quirks and personalities, and they are well thought out.
Writing Style: 10/10
If I didn't know any better, I'd say you're a professional writer! XD You're writing style is fun to read and is full of personality. If you ever publish a book, I'd be the first one to read it ^^.
Overall enjoyment: 5/5
Just for the heck of it, since I really, really, truly enjoyed this story, I'll give you 5 bonus marks.
Total: 99/100
Labels: Melissa