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Monday, January 31, 2011, 8:22 PM
12 Months
Author: FlyxToxHeavenStory Title: 12 months
Reviewer: Melissa
Before I start, since you don't do forewords, I have added 1-2 pts to every category.
Title: 6/6 - Interesting title. It fits the story nicely.
Background/Poster: 6/6- Beautiful poster. Dark colours are used to express a dark and sad story. Well done!
Forewords:/10- N/A
Plot: 15/16- Overall, the plot was easy to understand and follow. It was interesting and eye catching. There was one part in the beginning was a little confusing though. Before the accident, Changmin and Yuchun were best friends, I understood that part. What really confused me was in February, Yuchun spoke about Changmin like he was never friends with him.
Creativity/Originality: 16/16- I really liked how the story was split up into months. It was unique and caught my attention immediately.
Flow: 10/11- You didn't rush the story and it was like everything fell perfectly into place.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9/12-I only found a few small spelling mistakes, and a few tense mistakes, but other than that, it's great! I love how you use a wide variety of vocabulary in your stories. It makes the story more interesting and enjoyable to read.
Characterization: 16/16-Good characterization here. Great description as well. Every character has their own different personalities which makes it easy to differentiate and all the more interesting to read.
Writing Style: 11/11-Great writing style. Most stories I've seen you write are sad stories and you're very good at writing them. Good description and definitely a unique piece of writing. Good job!
Overall enjoyment: 6/6
Total: 95/100
Labels: Melissa